UnpaidAuthor

Writing this review 3 chapters in, with the prologue being more of a teaser into the MC's personality, speaking of which is my cup of tea. The chapters are very large, which can be off-putting to some, so hopefully this can be improved on in the future. Overall, a well-presented story so far, keep it up.

Lmao

Xianxia isn't my cup of tea, but it is clear that the author has put a lot of thought into their work in terms of characters and world-building. The writing quality needs work, but I'm sure it will improve as the story goes on. Also very refreshing to see a female lead.

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Maybe it would be better to add this before the above paragraph?

I doubt your kidnappers require consent

Share it with the rest of us ^_^

Nice introduction chapter, but the MC's name wasn't revealed?

What's this supposed to represent?