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I am passionate about writing fiction stories and poetry.
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the story is exhilarating to read- the adventure of a school trip which takes an unexpected turn is a brilliant idea for an action packed short short story. The writing is superb with all excellent similes which help to convey the tension and emotion. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The most exciting part of the story is when Veeir, Jack and Sandy are trying to sleep inside the house, and they are woken by the sounds of wild animals outside. This is most terrifying situation where the boys are in clear danger-this is the climax of the story, when tension rises and rises and sense of the danger becomes worse and worse until it is at the peak which is called the climax...[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The story set up, boys' preparation for the trip to Dhikala and fun in bus is well described. Sandy's characterization as class clown is good.
Three adventurous boys went on a school trip. [img=coins]The description of Jungle and joy of boys are explained very well by author.
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] Interesting story of 3best frIends lost in the jungle. The description of secluded house, jungle adventure, wild animals and ghost every scene is penned down very well. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Wow! I am amazed with the vocabulary used in the story. The campsite and forest description is quite well written. The boys planned their safety quite well by choosing the first floor to stay overnight. I wish, ghost scene would have been a little longer but overall very satisfying to read. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]