there are more ad chapters than real chapters. The start feels rushed, and the characters feel hollow.

Need more, Haven't seen any marvel yet but I love it so far.[img=update][img=recommend]

give me more, i need more. love the work...[img=recommend]

I need more of this, it is original within its FF genera. Love your work keep it up. [img=update]

more, more MORE!! PLZ

I quite like this novel, the way the world is portrayed is fascinating and the characters are unique. I would recommend this.

give me more [img=update]

I stand corrected, the plot just thickens and builds up more suspense. I would recommend the read if you like an original spin on an HP FF. note to author; Sorry for almost dropping... I now know not to speak if I have not given a novel a chance... [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

I for one would love to see this story come to it's completion, it has a very interesting start. The only thing that bugs me is that we have no other strong character to compare to the mc's power scale to, there needs to be a clear understanding of the worlds power scale and where the mc stands on that scale. Oh and a bit more world background is needed.

Got you, I'll give it another go.[img=recommend]

I loved your novel until the mc called Hagrid a smelly professor and wanted to steal his dragon egg, it is not personal. Hagrid is just my favourite HP character, that is my reason for dropping. Note to author; you can improve your click rate by using a spell checker. not to make you feel down about writing... Your English just needs some more work. You have potential.

sorry for the confusion tho.

The request was for the author to use a spell checker, I want to read the novel but it gives me a headache, I repeated please for the comment word count. It looks like a good novel, the novel caught my interest. My request was only for the author to use Grammarly, it is in simplified Chinese. [img=faceslap][img=recommend]

his, he is male so his. if it is al female it is her.

I really like your work, it is one of my favourite HP FF to read. By far one of the best hp ffs. Would highly recommend it. note to author: Need more Chapters Plz.

请下载语法。Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

one of my favourite HP FF it has all of the drama, comedy, action and more the best part it that the mc is not an idiot. I would highly recommend it as a quick read.

I love your novel, it has a feel that i haven't felt in a long time. It reminds me of when i started reading, I would highly recommend it. A note for the author: Please get Grammarly. love your novel.

Magic is an object in English so instead of she, magic should be an it

This is a good book, but the author should do some proofreading. I would love this book if it had a correct comprehensive English. It is a good novel if you could get over the inconsistent sentences.