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2021-07-18 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • DaoistaZUlBy
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    it's so sweet how we get to see details of Jk's as we read his present.

    Ch 18 A dream too surreal to ever come true
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    the fight between facts and faith. this was a good take .

    Ch 17 Truce between foes after the plan was ruined
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    dear authour, give us more of Rachel, please. and oh yes, the whole Spirit Nomad is lit but, does this mean that JK has reached his full potential?

    Ch 16 fraternizing with the enemy
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    things are growing hectic

    Ch 15 Angels on Branly
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    how an ordinary day Paris turned into a massacre by two extraterrestrials, only to be covered up as terrorist attack. the parallels between your fictional universe and the real one is almost pristine.

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    how an ordinary day Paris turned into a massacre by two extraterrestrials, only to be covered up as terrorist attack. the parallels between your fictional universe and the real one is almost pristine.

    Ch 15 Angels on Branly
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    This chapter made me cry. oh finally Juda gets to see his mother. it's like you thought of everything. I'm tearing as I'm writing this.

    Ch 14 The Ancestral Plane
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    the way Ta-hawa and JK fit into the real world is so neat. those were actual mysterious death. I did some research on Abdul and Ivan, they are based on actual people. you craft is prestine. I have also noticed the way you choose to use sorcery, so well that it inclines more to reality than fantasy.

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    from sci-fi to fantasy, man. I'm so glad that JK got to see his mother. it made me cry. this is the second time your novel is making me cry, man .

    Ch 14 The Ancestral Plane
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    things just got interested

    "Where am I?", I asked her, "during the explosion you created a direct link between your conscious and subconscious which created a bridge to here", she replied. "And where is here?", I asked, now more curious, "here is the place between bardo and limbo; the Ancestral Plane, it's a channel hub. Benevolent and malevolent spirits and souls either come here to channel into the dreams of the living or to communicate with the souls who no longer dwell with the living. No human can come here and go back except for the Vumwinu Nkangazi and the Ingonyama Ebomvu.", she replied.
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    the way Ta-hawa and JK fit into the real world is so neat. those were actual mysterious death. I did some research on Abdul and Ivan, they are based on actual people. you craft is prestine. I have also noticed the way you choose to use sorcery, so well that it inclines more to reality than fantasy.

    We walked silently, ever since the Rotana Hotel, Ta-hawa started assassinating every Munssu on sight. This has been the basis of our arguments. The Kongo indeed feel no remorse for their enemies but that doesn't mean you have to turn into a murderous raving lunatic, just because.
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    I read of this once in a book by Dr. Lembe Masiala

    Jk: oh yeah, I forgot, the Kongo feel no remorse for their enemies.
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    misogynistic view, this isn't politically correct.

    Jk: are you like in some murderous period?
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    this Chapter was all about Black Girl Power. awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Ch 11 Monster
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    wow. not at all, I saw your link on Facebook and I've been hooked since.

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    the author's choice of words, just, wow.

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    this novel is truly brilliant

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    yoh, this chapter, man! what a statement. it's like you have no filter. I'm loving it. what you wrote about victimizing the threat, that really hit home. it's like, you are using one story to tell a thousand. One chapter alone is politically driven, reads about African deities, touches on self guilt whilst keeping the story afloat, effectively.

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    yoh, this chapter, man! what a statement. it's like you have no filter. I'm loving it. what you wrote about victimizing the threat, that really hit home.

    Ch 9 Divided we Stand, United we Fall
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    to find a novel with a male leading role that encompasses even stronger women is just priceless. I understand that the author doesn't share feminist view but your description is valuable for literary work. Ta-hawa's grow as a character is equally fascinating. judging by the next chapter's title, more of her will be explored. can't wait!!!!!!!!!

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