GaZe_Zero

I really think the MC shouldn’t gain deity lvl of power from drinking Coco’s blood. My reasoning behind this is that the Vampires essence lets him absorb the power, but surely there’s a limit. Sure he can absorb the power, but the Vampires essence will always be first as it let Blanche absorb the power in the first place. That means the power can never be fully realized as the Vamps essence cannot account for it. It’s like a funnel, as while he has the power, he can’t get it to fully go through. Idk that’s my opinion, as Coco is way above a Vamp. The Vamp might get some of the essence but can’t get everything and probably loses more than they gain.

Great chap but I have some points of hold up. One I’m really hoping that he doesn’t become deity level of op, as the VK is already insanely strong. I feel like the VK and vampire essence would take precedence over whatever he absorbs, so even if it’s a god, he would have a limit on how much he could absorb. That limit being the inherent limit of the VK. Second I’m really looking for some more vamp powers/scenes of him utilizing the vampire powers.

You expect too much from an early teen boy. Magneto spent literally his whole life getting to the point he was at, and sadly the mc doesn’t have that same forced drive or desperation. If anything I would be surprised if he surpasses Magneto, him being super OP more so than he is would just destroy the vibe.

Good stuff, I am still excited to see what powers he got from the VK. Also I’m wondering if he will prefer to be known as the Vampire King or Ice Prince

Good chap, I’m kind of excited for him to become known as the Vamp King in OOO, maybe even meet Billy who try’s to kill him. Also with the supplies he is going to have to get that fear out of their minds or else it’ll cripple humanity, and let’s be honest we all love a strong human society.

Good stuff, I truly get it. I do hope these comments give you some inspiration or motivation like they did for me. I also hope to see his powers finally explained that were hinted at so long ago.

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A really good fic, and one of the best RWBY Self-Insert ones out there. Author really cares about reviews and actually responds to feedback. Highly recommend due to world building, keeping to canon, and appropriate depictions of characters

Looking forward, he thing I like about your writing is that you use lore and stick close to the story, keep it up

I think this is a great Rwby fic, but the one major issue I have is how ahead Ruby is portrayed. Even if she time traveled back in time by one year, she would just be an average student and not so far ahead, as in the actual show most of her time was spent catching up to current students. Also her combat style being as good as Pyrrha and overpowering Glynda is not possible following the Rwby timeline, and is just narrowly possible if it was volume 9 Ruby. Really author has buffed Ruby up too much, and instead of focusing more on plot and changing stuff through actions, they focus on powering Ruby up enough to deal with it.