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Meliosaka

Meliosaka

Lv10

Being able to write novels that can satisfy me is my biggest dream and I'll do my best to accomplish it.

2021-07-13 BeigetretenItaly
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  • Meliosaka
    Meliosaka3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Idiosyncratic

    Hi! Thank you for leaving a review. Could I ask which chapter you reached?

  • Meliosaka
    Meliosaka3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Mahesh_Babu

    Hope you will like it!

  • Meliosaka
    Meliosaka3 years ago
    Antwortet auf Mahesh_Babu

    my pleasure

  • Meliosaka
    Meliosaka3 years ago
    Verschickt

    Self-review here! I hope you will like my story. I'm doing my best to improve daily and wish all of you enjoy this novel! If you had any questions or comments to do, I'd gladly accept them, either positive or negative. I'll read and answer everything! Sooo, have fuuun on this new amazing reading day!

  • Meliosaka
    Meliosaka3 years ago
    Kommentiert

    I think the story is interesting, but you should improve how it is written. I mean the English level. There are quite a lot of mistakes and I highly suggest you use "Grammarly" to find the mistakes I'm talking about. And you should try to write 1000 words per chapter. Don't give up and believe in yourself!

A Subject For The System

"Am I really gonna die here... like this?" [System's requirements for the System activation: Fulfilled!] "Where does this robotic voice come from?!" [Subject's power system implementation: Activated!] "I must be getting crazy just before dying." [Question for the Subject: Does the Subject want to become stronger?] "Huh?" [The Subject is requested to answer. The System will now repeat the question: Does the Subject want to become stronger?] "If I must die believing to be in a videogame... I don't see a point in refusing this proposal..." "Yes!" [The System has registered the Subject's answer. System implementation completed.] Wren is a young boy living in a modern world where having special abilities is the norm but a part of the population still doesn't have them. Wren is talentless and can only count on his brain to live on in that harsh world. Suddenly, a group of schoolmates decides to beat him up and he is left on the brink of death. A robotic voice appears out of nowhere, asking him to become stronger. Who would refuse such a sweet proposal even if they think it's just a dream? Will Wren succeed in changing the world based on violence he lives in? In a society where only the strongest are listened to, he will aim for the top of the strength levels. Author here: This story will be quite a serious one (I get bored without harsh scenes). Also, don't expect the classic cliches of the bad guys who are just bad because yes. I'll give my best to create interesting characters and valuable background stories. The story is still developing, so I can only wish you to enjoy reading it. If you wish to leave a comment and let me know anything that comes to your mind after reading it, I'll be glad to read all of you! Thanks a lot for reading till here!

Meliosaka · Fantasie
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2 Chs

Dark sky

They killed my family They destroyed my house They tarnished my father's name But no one will lay a hand on my sister! Arslan Crimson is a young boy living in a harsh cultivation world. His family was one of the five Great families controlling the Celestial Empire. But his family's prestige wasn't destined to last. A group of unknown people wearing black robes put an end to it. No one survived... except for Arslan and his little sister, who were welcomed by another Great family. Inside that House, Arslan has to bear with endless bullying, due to being weak. He thought things would have gotten better after beginning to attend the Imperial Academy... but the disdain the other families had towards the Crimson family led to even more troubles. Isolation became the only solution, "This society is rotten!" But, thanks to the Power of Darkness, the only heritage left of his family, he is destined to rise to the top and become the strongest person in the known world, "I want to see who will dare to bully my sister and me then!"

Meliosaka · Fantasie
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105 Chs