Aniket_Singh_1713
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ok so I have read a couple of chapters so far and my first question before reading ahead is .....do the characters continue to converse like this because people don't talk like that really atleast constantly.......in your persuit of fancy vocabulary and speech you are forgoing the normalcy a book need for good emersion.....can't talk about story as i have yet to read more to make a conclusion ....so i hope i get cleared about this.
The story is good so far and i don't find any major mistake so far which can't be ignored so great work .....but just my opinion but can the author pls try to increase the release rate of chapters for atleast the first 100 chapters if it's going to have 100 chapters cause the story is just picking momentum and it's very hard to wait for next chapter already but to wait for 4-5 days for another chapter is just too much