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The grammar is fantastic, albeit some errors, it's still polished...great buildup, amazing character, world building, thrilling action scenes which is outstanding amongst other qualities...I feel the premise could have been as compelling as the progressive chapters (2)... but I sense that this is a book no one should miss. it's got potential and there is still room for improvement.[img=recommend]
Grammar's decent. Progression's a bit slow. The tension's a little overwhelming. IMHO, the FL is overbearing as h*ll. But she is a bit relatable. The male lead has guts, appeal and stuff. I understand this is a cop novel but I don't really enjoy excessive vulgarity. The character POV's a turnoff but I understand it does capture the attention of readers' that it's looking for. just work on making them less annoying. I really hope the story thrives beyond author's expectations.
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my point exactly
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