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All plots are too predictable and overused, super selfish sociopath reincarnated into fiction world with system and everything and everyone bent to will and go in his ways, all of his choices of actions, be it with girls Rito, Yuto and Issei went exactly as I expected, and Jesus, in Issei case it was basically trademarks overused plot that he get killed and got his sacred gear stolen,i mean, I've seen the same cliche fan fictions many times before but this is the first time I've been able to predict everything so accurately and correctly in every chapters.
You seriously asking me this which part should i start first? This story is self fulfilling and generic as fuck or the fact that MC IS HAVING SEX WITH BOTH HIS SISTER AND HIS MOTHER! or he being generic BASTARD ASSHOLE who reincarnated into Dxd with plot knowledge or he is a fucking OP from the start or the fact that girls being sex bots for him? If this story only has one of these issues mentioned above then it still be amenable with some seriously effort but if all of these issues comes together in one story? It was beyond salvageable.
I am not gonna lie or sugarcoat it, this is one of the worst story i have ever seen..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Is it too much to asked for you to be less repetition? the same plot, the same gene, the same victims(atleast in Issei's case, i have always seen him in your books and the fact that he suffers in the same way certainly doesn't help too) and Jesus! You now even plan to drag great characters like Kiana, Mei and Bronya down and want to make them into another brainless harem sex bot too?! Come on man can you atleast TRYING and putting some effort when you writing something
Finally someone bringing up about kendo club!! So far i only everyone complaining about Issei should be arrested for peeking but no one said anything about group mob lynching someone to death with kendo stick!!! Ugh, double standard!!! If you asked me both parties are in the wrong here.
Actually, it descript she already run out of power when Issei arrived and Riser is pretty much still in full health unfazed and nonchalant when Rias destroy his head and continue to talking like nothing happened, come to think of it, Issei kinda kind of saving her honour by giving her a noble reason to surrender instead of just getting beat up by Riser, but yeah I agree, she may leave half of peerage to die to recruit them, but she still league better than Cersei.
Wow, i will admit it, only a few stories manage to make me hate Mc from the start of chapter 1, look like Mc is just another generic reincarnated shit head bastard who will go around steal girls from original Mc and catch them all like a fucking pokemon, It is kind of boring premise if you asked me.
Interesting, I will give a plus to a fact, Mc doesn't appear before canon start and kill Issei for boosted gear then collecting girls like Pokémon, btw, what is this war that about to happen in mortal world? Is this cannon? Which volume this timeline currently in?
Isn't this basically almost the same fic with inner voice? But leaving aside that this fic basically have the same plot with your other fic aside, You should have some originality.