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Zalgo_Aredrey

Zalgo_Aredrey

Lv2

I just want to learn grammar and fantasize.

2021-07-06 BeigetretenIndonesia
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey1yr
    Kommentiert

    hm...

    Ch 19 Not a chapter
    Killua Zoldyck in MHA
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf TetekGede

    yeah that's it lol XD

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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Kommentiert

    i feel like i've read some manhua with the sake situation as this but, I couldn't remember it.

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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Argent_Evergarden1

    bishoujo fantasy, kenja deshi o nanoru kenja

    Kensei, who was shot, closed his eyes subconsciously, but after a while, he didn't feel anything, which made him wonder what was happening in his body, but then, suddenly he saw something soft on his chest, and he also felt that his thing disappeared. "Wh - What is this?!" He was at a loss, but he turned and left since he knew that it wasn't the time to stay in this place.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf VedVank

    bishoujo fantasy

    Kensei, who was shot, closed his eyes subconsciously, but after a while, he didn't feel anything, which made him wonder what was happening in his body, but then, suddenly he saw something soft on his chest, and he also felt that his thing disappeared. "Wh - What is this?!" He was at a loss, but he turned and left since he knew that it wasn't the time to stay in this place.
    Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
    Anime und Comics · akikan40
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf SlothElephant2k18

    I see

    Even though their mouths say they don't want to, their bodies are honest.
    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf ThoTslayer_10l

    it's an oc

    Ch 2 1. Future?
    Delinquent Story Inside The Dimensional Group Chat.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Azathoth2

    this girl, i think she talked about her game party.

    Kona: Hmm, bar, huh? It reminds me of the sensation of a party after killing an Ice Dragon.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf unknown_daoist

    ikr? WHERERREEEEE???

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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Korner

    sauce?

    Even though their mouths say they don't want to, their bodies are honest.
    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Sheyan

    thx

    "Well, it is alright, do it slowly, it isn't like he's going somewhere, but you need to know that you won't be alone in this relationship, alright?" Rin said with a kind tone.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Kommentiert

    who is this Rin again? couldn't find her pict

    "Well, it is alright, do it slowly, it isn't like he's going somewhere, but you need to know that you won't be alone in this relationship, alright?" Rin said with a kind tone.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Verschickt

    Your writing quality was great but, it tasted bland same as for the story development. You might want it to become descriptive as possible and it's also one of your minus points. Try to make the word more simple. I know you can improve, good luck!

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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf EroGaki

    Murayama flashback

    Shishio might wear something casual since he was wearing white sleeves and a blue navy sakujan jacket with a Fuu Dog pattern on the back and on his right chest, a white t-shirt, skinny jeans pants, and sneakers. His style might seem delinquent, but when he wore it, he gave a different feeling.
    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Darkstar11051999

    chpter 1605 when the fight is started.

    In truth, Haru wanted to take a laptop from his zipper storage directly, but when he saw Mimori, who was right in front of him, he didn't really want to surprise her. Even though he had a telepathic ability that could manipulate someone else's mind, and he also had "Heaven's Door" ability that could turn someone into a book, adding or erasing a memory from someone, he didn't really want to do it on a woman if possible.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf VibingElder

    he used it, on tsukai world break.

    In truth, Haru wanted to take a laptop from his zipper storage directly, but when he saw Mimori, who was right in front of him, he didn't really want to surprise her. Even though he had a telepathic ability that could manipulate someone else's mind, and he also had "Heaven's Door" ability that could turn someone into a book, adding or erasing a memory from someone, he didn't really want to do it on a woman if possible.
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Pov

    So, I need to establish the presence of character and learn to make the foundation of the story? If it's the problem then I will try to improve.

    Starting From The Dimensional Group Chat
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf Hiraeths

    my bad i forgot to erase that part

    Ch 5 School and Quest
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Antwortet auf DaoistQnHbXt

    i know it's very monotone here.

    Ch 4 Nen?
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  • Zalgo_Aredrey
    Zalgo_Aredrey2yr
    Kommentiert
    [Pic Here]
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