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not bad at all, in the middle it went full east china sea, but generally good translation................................................................
Porunga doesn't have that kind of power
it's interesting, a bit slow, but very interesting. hope you continue...................................................................................
same, i saw my library empty and thought hammer ban on all fanfiction
thx for the chapter, but the name kept changing for the last 3 ch
Thanks for the chapter, I don't remember very well but the mount of Gan fall eat a common zoan horse fruit or a bird fruit. The Mythical fruit was on hachinosu
thanks for the chapter, but the previous version was better. this is too much info dump and characters
it's really weird, the system's supose to have only 2 abilities, but then it's a map, an a danger sensor, an alarm and more.
Maybe change the title and pic of the fic. Also scribblehub is an option.
Keep it going, thanks for uploading It again