Yogesh_Birthare

It's ok to just give credit for novel's name and author in synopsis u didn't have to write credit to just write" reference from (novel's name) and by (author name). Go for it I will definitely give it a try. Best of luck 👍

Bro I know that but author just created worse mess up of system and world developed by original author . And he shamelessly write in synopsis that this novel is his original work , man at least give credit to original where u take reference for most of your story .As a fan of original work which is masterpiece ,it hurts me and irks me .So if hurts ur feeling i am sorry but really i never criticize any author for thier novels even when they are not up to standards but pls don't mess up with originals

pretty much cliche and one of better thing is mc still having brain even being beta You can read this but little forced As writing style is tad bit boring focusing on side elements too much But quite a nice try

Hmm.. This novel is 60% rip off of novel I am the fated villain Anyways good try but story is all over the place. MC thinks too much and act less moreover world setting is too loose I gave you thumbs up for writing oh sorry copying but at least make some good changes instead of bad one

@Tyler89558 Nice review

Thanks for such a nice review as it saves my time. I didn't like slave like MC , I prefer anti-hero , high IQ and villian type MC which are not like some beta protagonist. So therefore thanks .👍

Nice Overall But.. there are some parts in story where author take gore to next level (like penis exploding) it's tad bit disgusting , overall good one

For me only stories are those that can arise your curiosity and make you engaged in them, and this one definitely does this job Deep background Awesome pacing Not a dork MC(most important) Thanks Author

Everything is really good from world building to character development and from nice plot to engaging writing style. Only downside that i feel is slow pace and tad bit repetitive techniques. Other than that it's pretty much awesome 🙂

One of the best one for me as it is engaging MC is NOT random dumb shit Overall plot and world setting is quite elaborate Only downside is plot pacing is somewhat slow. OVERALL NICE JOB 👍