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DioBrando_11mthKommentiertYeah, we can enjoy the backseat cuz of you.
He stepped forward, towering over their leader. "I'm going to the front a lot today..." He looked the red guy in the eye, "I apologize, but I had to stand up for my father too."- DioBrando_11mthKommentiert
Damn, you have a way with your words
As Raymond lay there, his body broken and battered, the pain coursing through his every fiber, he felt an overwhelming wave of emotions. The weight of his own body pressed heavily upon him, his spirit bruised and crushed. Layla, tears streaming down her face, cradled his wounded head, her trembling hands desperately attempting to mend what was broken. In that miserable moment, fear and helplessness intertwined within her as she whispered pleadingly, begging for his return to consciousness. The air was heavy with a sense of loss, as the team gathered around their fallen comrade, their faces etched with worry and sorrow. The battle had taken its toll, leaving scars not only on Raymond's broken body but also on the hearts of those who cared for him. - DioBrando_11mthKommentiert
SUBARASHI!! THE SHIP WILL SAIL.
Outside the room, three individuals remained, their emotions palpable. Layla sniffled and tried to compose herself, tears streaming down her face. Khaled, his gaze fixed upon Blake, sought answers. "Why is the principal acting like that? Isn't Ray the son of just a knight captain? Is his mother a powerful noble?" - DioBrando_11mthVerschickt
The one thing that stood out the most from this book for me is the prose. Most of the authors in this platform are FUCKED. They have a story and they just write the story without any format. So it was refreshing to see someone give that more attention. And again, the internal conflict is better than most novels, the world building is top tier, and I also got a valuable lesson on using instruments in novels.You don't focus on music, you focus on the feeling that comes with it. Its usually impossible to bring music in novel, but that was a good use of the medium. If I praise you more, it will become spoiler so that is it for me. Keep up the good work
- DioBrando_1yrKommentiert
I don't even know what's going on
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - DioBrando_1yrKommentiertCh 1 Plot twist, you say?
- DioBrando_1yrVerschickt
- DioBrando_1yrKommentiert
I had heart attack in my brain while writing this.
A blonde girl covered her mouth in laughter and showed her phone. "Look at this virgin. He literally sends love quotes to me every day." - DioBrando_1yrAntwortet auf DioBrando_
tho that makes no sense
A forked tongue that appeared to be longer than others moved downward from the top of her head. The fourth of these traits was a red-tinted, pointy tail that extended from the top of her buttocks. - DioBrando_1yrKommentiert
Medusa with the body of a prostitute is what I'm imagining rn
A forked tongue that appeared to be longer than others moved downward from the top of her head. The fourth of these traits was a red-tinted, pointy tail that extended from the top of her buttocks. - DioBrando_1yrAntwortet auf madstork22
Are you dying bro?
He set magic as his first priority. Being considered a slow learner was much better than being weak for life and being forced to take another spin at reincarnation.