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Flamefalco

Flamefalco

Lv3

Hello, I'm Flamefalco and I am Deaf person wanting to become a writer as my hobby. Though my English isn't good, any feedback will help me a lot.

2021-06-28 BeigetretenGlobal
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92.2h

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112

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5

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22
  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Here we go again.

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    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasie · US_DreamerDon
    detail
  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Verschickt

    Ok but hear me out, Im not into romance but this story got me hook on the first chapter, this Novel Is heartwarming. Im definitely going to read this more often. Adding this to my collection. Cant wait to see how it turn out.

    altalt
    One Sword Binds Your Heart
    Geschichte · SkyEmpress
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert
    I looked at her, betrayed. When she had picked her favorite brooch, she came and sat beside me.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasie · WuxiFan
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert
    "Your kitchen will be Hell's Kitchen and Hotels, a Nightmare!"
    altalt
    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasie · WuxiFan
    detail
  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Omg Ladybrith planned this? No way

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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Welp. Goodbye random kid

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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Thank God for Food. But what about water :0

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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Let me guess. Mc will stay there for the longest? And if time doesnt collide with real world. I’d Gladly take it

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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    I send a mood swing system. Or a psychopath system xD

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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Mood

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    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasie · US_DreamerDon
    detail
  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Actually a good start!!

    "Listen, the tournaments are just around the corner and acting like this won't give you a higher chance of keeping your seat." hissed the lightning queen as she grasped onto her crystal sceptre like it was the only way she could control her rage.
    altalt
    How I Became the Strongest Sovereign
    Fantasie · TofSpades
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Antwortet auf SEP1A

    OK, thanks, I'll keep that advice, everyone's writing is different so it is a bit harder to adapt. But I'll try my best!

    Then it got awkward between them. Kashi was wondering how to communicate with him. At the same time, they wanted to get out of the dungeon knowing it had failed due to the incident from that person. Speaking of that person, who is that? He has the power to destroy anything. Why does he have that much power? Countless thoughts spiral through Kashi's mind. Then Flame taps his shoulder to snap out his mind as he was gesturing. He was confused at first, then after a while, he been asking for paper and something to write with. Kashi goes through his backpack only to find some scrap paper and a pen. Then he shows it to Flame, He quickly snatches it as he begins to write. After some scribbling, He showed it to Kashi only to said
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    A Rift Between Time and Space
    Fantasie · Flamefalco
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Must protecc

    "We have the same classes. Stick to me and don't look at anyone."
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    Devil Child
    LGBT+ · SEP1A
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Good thing that you educate people of what Autism and raising awareness. This is my favorite novel now. Looking forward to more chapters.

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    Devil Child
    LGBT+ · SEP1A
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    Thank you for the Chapter. This story is well writting. Looking to see more of Your story!!

    Ch 1 Reunion
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    The Mage of Origin
    Fantasie · Isaac_Vaughn
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert

    So you decided to play with my feelings? I see how is it.

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    My Destiny As The Villainess
    Fantasie · Soun_Phavin
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Verschickt

    Hello, This story is very interesting. But here is some tip if you want to become a better author. Have you tried Grammarly or ProwritingAid. (You dont have to pay for it.) The story overall is really good!! I like the charactr development and not into cliche type of story. Keep it up!

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    Coincidental encounter
    Fantasie · tanny88
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Verschickt

    Really love this one. Expecially the First Part. This isn’t cliche where charscter suddenly Get over powered and it show a realistic rational thinking. Would love to see more of your work!

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    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasie · US_DreamerDon
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  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert
    Dieses Kapitel wurde gelöscht
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    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasie · US_DreamerDon
    detail
  • Flamefalco
    Flamefalco2yr
    Kommentiert
    Dieses Kapitel wurde gelöscht
    altalt
    Aristocrat to Adventurer
    Fantasie · US_DreamerDon
    detail