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Freaxx10114dKommentiertcan u make similiar system kind world like author pov/novel extra
Reborn a Dragon in fantasy world <Kingdom building and sex>- Freaxx10120dKommentiert
i love world buildingg, do more often please thank for the chapter
(For those interested in the kingdom-building aspect, I hope you enjoy it, and for those who aren't, feel free to skip until the next part after the — — — It wasn't something I explored too much originally, but I really enjoyed writing this chapter so there probably will be more like it here and there. Let me know what you think. - Freaxx10120dVerschickt
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i personally enjoy it a lot, just continue bro thanks for the update.
Guys, I need your honest review about my story that I've been writing and you are reading. Lately, I've been getting the feeling that maybe it's not connecting with you and you are not enjoying it. I want to know if that's the case. Are there specific aspects you don't enjoy? Is there something you think could be improved? Should I consider discontinuing it altogether?detailTensura: Primordial Silver to True Dragon - The Tale of Rimuru TempestAnime und Comics · God_RimuruTempest - Freaxx10127dKommentiertCh 44 On Pause
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with OP mc u need a lot goals to achive, make some kind list of his objective like for example in order to protect his family he need to be strong, but he can't never be there for them, so he make his own force that can cover him up, etc
Alright.... I need some help , I got somewhat carried away in my writing and made the MC a tad bit too strong... - Freaxx1011mthVerschickt
Wheres the update author, can u make stable update please. It’s really fresh story, not a lot people try hamura descendant as background chatacter. It has a lot potential especially tenseigan and shikotsumyaku not a lot discovered in movie. Can u make it somehow he can increase his bloodline purity to 100% or even break limit that, i love to see what will happen.
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idk what to say man, simply marvelous story right here. I like how each character decribe especially tsunade and mc. Don't forget how well u make other pov, it's certainly make the story more interesting. It's not how many fanfic only focus on its mc and i feel that kind of story always to rigid u know, with u describe other pov, it make it seem more open and free. TFTC bro, hope u make more update
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maybe u can also add otsutsuki arc like in fanfic Naruto: since ancient time
(A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?] - Freaxx1011mthKommentiert
i have suggestion, maybe try yo build his secret force like wandenreich in bleach or akatsuki/kara. Well because he is to strong it will easily became boring, so for most part of his plan just order his subordinate and only for interesting thing he act himself like for example zero tail arc, akatsuki, the box of bliss, moryo, otsutsuki, kara.
(A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?] - Freaxx1011mthKommentiertCh 7 Chakra Affinity Dilemma
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small arc will be nice
Avatar (blue monkey people) - Freaxx1011mthKommentiert
With his high level comprehension he can combine all
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just suggestion, sword dao is his primary dao, maybe add secondary like alchemist dao or something so he can make his force as foundation
The concept of his system was quite simple, the system had already chosen the sword dao for him and he had to keep swinging the sword to unlock further realms in Sword dao. - Freaxx1011mthKommentiert
really, u now potion is important especially for learning alchemist that can help almost all his plan
History of Magic was by far the most boring subject, Herbology, he hadn't tried yet, but he doubted he would like, and Potions… well, Ethan wouldn't say he disliked it, but it, again, sounded a bit like a bother to learn recipes and such. - Freaxx1011mthKommentiert
maybe you can focus on magic more, i mean in manhwa jinwo has infinite mana from his black heart. Maybe some sort assassin-magician
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Freaxx1011mthKommentiertCh 14 14. The Raid Part-I
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1 if he really became alchemist then can u explore more about alchemist and of course he need a lot material and money so maybe also explore about world and business
Slytherin: Manipulative harry, Alchemist harry, Wrong boy who lived, Martial magic, Genuinely good Dumbledore.