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Thank you so much for the review Nakasuka! Glad you like my little space opera! :D
Thank you for believing in me, I will improve :D
You are right, it could use more spaces and paragraphs, I kinda put everything like in a block :T
Oh, so it is different than in Spanish, I will need to change quite a lot, but I will be able to do it. This was something that was really eating me up from the inside, haha!
Done, thank you for the recommendation, the words really flew under my radar :T
I have Grammarly :T
Okay, hear me out, I know, I know, "a five-star rating he might just want to call for attention on himself" NO! Hear me out! This novel is awesome, it's just amazing! Take the time to read it, it is just fantastic, out of this freaking world! The characters are amazing and perfectly design 5/5, the quality of the writing is superb 5/5, the story development is just delicious 5/5, the stability of updates is good, for a work of this quality you can't ask daily updates 5/5, and the world background is amazing 5/5 I know still, it looks like a stretch, but it's true, this is a fantastic novel in the making! Read it!!!
Oh god, you can't end it like that, I need more!!! D:
Ah- Ah- my poor little heart! This is too cute to handle, you should have put a warning of wholesome levels out of this world!
I love it! Will keep reading! Plus, this is A plus material to expand my vocabulary, so many new and exiting words :D