Flauros_M_M

Read it, you'll not regret it. The original Novel might have a lot of criticism in the first chapters because of the constant use of sound effects and the protagonist's choices, but it's gold too.

Story started with MC being self-conscious of the transmigrated plot, a bit too much arrogant but still smart and witty. But then she turns overly silly, greedy, ignorant about her own situation and even stupid at times, to the point of causing a few deaths out of it. The last few chapters where really rushed, jumping several months/years at the end and leaving one of the main plots of the whole comic, Xiao's curse, behind with no resolution whatsoever and apparently adding another cursed down the line, never touching it again before the end. The original soul of MC seems to be lost in the void as the current one's living in the past forever.

So the last two chapters are locked behind a paywall... and it also seems like there isn't anymore to the book as there as no more chapters being released in months. Well, that's a shame. Will stay without knowing what happens next then.

Good story and development, bad writing with several mistakes and repetitive words every chapter(you'll read the word hate so many times that it'll lose it's meaning halfway trough), MC's cluelessness about everything makes sense on her background. That end was, disappointing, to say the least. It was understandable on the family part but disastrous on the romance part. I didn't thought there would be a second book by the way it ended, but there it's. Unfortunately it's on another platform, so it's another turndown. High chances of not reading it again anyway, that end really killed it for me.

What the... What the heck was this end? It's not just a bad ending, it's terrible! The history on itself was good, my only complaint being the constant bad punctuation and misplaced words, but this... this feels beyond rushed. From heart warming after so much suffering to... this, bland, selfish and downright desastrous choice? That now can't be fixed because the MC can't even think for once to tell Christian WHY she had to reject him now so he can wait for her to be ready to be his mate...!? The extra chapters are not going to fix this... "end", Autor. Not after this clear END in the text.