My character is crazy, he talks alone because he's crazy during the dialogue with Garp, I wanted to make him understand, but if I didn't manage to get the right message across the story, I apologize

the author begins a story without hurrying. he does not make chapters with the sole aim of having access to monetization. and he managed to make a character endearing in a very short time

J'ai envie de déchirer la couverture du livre pour m'avoir fait espérer voir hirako shinji dans une pièce

I thought more about the appearance of rengoku, as it bears its name

It's a bit cheeky to make this kind of opinion about my own story. Besides, to sad for the can of words in the chapters as I write another story at the same time is complicated.

Thank you, do not hesitate to tell me if you have any ideas that could improve the story

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Could you explain to me what you find confusing in the story. Does that make my story suck?