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let's say it this way: 1) the translation is excellent, no doubt about it. 2) the plot and logic in the novel itself are not particularly developed (I read 137 chapters of the original). 3) this novel does not have a complicated plot, as always in Chinese fanfics there are 2 main types of writing, either the main character gives everyone a slap at first sight, and others are stunned and idolize him, or the main character is always on the edge and gives a slap purely on the reputation from his past slaps to other characters. in this fanfic, the first type. 4) mdeee, out of nowhere and without questions appeared and he immediately ate the chakra fruit, where is the logic? 5) it's annoying that in one chapter he reflects a little on the transience of mortals and himself gets romantically close to Ten Ten as much as possible according to Chinese fanfic rules. 6) Damn, and no one cares that some puppy picked up on the street easily scattered the patriarchs of the clan specializing in taijutsu in one-two? And it also gives away that after he scattered them, joining Guy's team, he showed his combat power much lower? 7) The main character has no ambitions at all, he just follows the flow/plot, in other words, he doesn't really interfere in anything unless ordered. 8) Compared to other decent fanfics (Chinese) on Naruto, this one is about below average. 9) But I can say that the translation is excellent, respect to the translator.

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I want to see mother-daughter, sister in a harem, but without going overboard when every female gender is in a harem. It would also be ideal if there was reverse r*pe/imposing oneself on the main character by force.

no offense, but at the time of reading chapter 9 I understood the following: as for me the title is too exaggerated. of the 9 chapters that I read it's just a fanfic everyday life, I don't expect any action anymore, if there is a journey between worlds, then most likely also everyday life or boredom. usually fanfics with such a name have many supernatural elements, how the main character uses his power, becomes stronger, learns, etc. and here only everyday life and pride that the main character is a spirit and not some simple spirit, but the spirit of one of the important concepts of the universe, namely gravity. at the same time the main character did not even use or explore his powers. also annoying that the main character just thought and it turns out that rumors have already reached another character, who immediately knows what to do and where to advise to go, because rumors do not come verbally and not after some time from some intermediaries, but directly whispers from the universe itself. cliche: shove some character and say something very vaguely and wait dozens of chapters to give a hint about this character. In short, there are holes in the fanfic, there is no sense of action atmosphere or correspondence to the title, for an amateur or just to read everyday life in order to while away the time it is suitable.

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Well, in short, like a classic. 1) the whole world was created for the main character; 2) not a very smart main character, who after moving to the magical world did not study magic and somehow develop his talent, since this is a "magical world" and all the "nonsense" that he spews supposedly does not apply to him (especially at the beginning, when he just finds out that there is natural and ritual magic and what the hell did he do if he was a teacher at a magic academy for a whole year?); 3) the main character gave up and did not even think briefly about the essence of the system; 4) 10 spells were invented in 1000 years? No, well, the creativity and stupidity of people all over the world apparently breaks the boundaries and how do they survive in the magical world, oh no, this world was created only for the main character; 5) in short, typical Chinese stuff, the characters and the main character are thin as cardboard. 6) purely to kill time while reading it will do, but nothing serious, it will do for beginners. (I am writing this after reading the first few chapters and it has already given me this conclusion and prediction based on my extensive experience)

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