luminous1_vanqu10

I have read up to the 20th chapter and so far it's nice.

maybe

don't worry just read it first and make some edits. I do that , I don't know how to detailly write fight scenes so a little AI helps.

but it's powerful too

I'm really excited for a story where the mc isn't the leader in the front but controls everything and keeps it in order.maybe someone will write a story about it too.so Anybody......

well it's his character that the author gavelet's give it a try

just think the mc has a little personality similar to Homelander.he has problems and he is strong.and can grow stronger in the future

YES thank you. At last someone said it.I was planning to explain it in the coming chapter. can you add this 'man child part in a review for the story please it will be helpful

does Chinese Gus have a thing for long legs I noticed it in some other stories like the legendary mechanic and others .