Rolling_thundaa

I get that this is a fanfic, and you can write it however you want, and i aint hating but the ninja world in Naruto does follow some concepts of physics. For example, during the first Chunin Exams, there was a question about the trajectory of a kunai that involved gravity. Plus, the Naruto universe even has satellites—several were used to connect the five daimyō when they were deciding how to deal with the growing threat of the Akatsuki.

🙋‍♂️

+1

it is not a long distance run but if an untrained highschool kid tries to run 1.2 km at his full speed he will eventually slow down and run out of stamina.So it is a good strategy to not go for the full speed from the start and save the extra juice for the last strech .

overall the story seemed good but the characters didn't feel real, the whole family died but I didn't feel a thing, it was like it was necessary for the MC to become a emo and chase power unconditionally.Even if it was a tragedy I didn't feel sad for the MC and killing the whole family seemed unnecessary

you know Author you need to touch grass,satisfying your cuckhold fetish with writing a novel and spoiling others days(you should atleast put a warning in the synopsis about NTR)i get heartbreak but this is too much and this clearly not tragedy,you were clear with what you were doing and its disgusting.

It was a good read initially but it felt rushed after the first 30 chapters. Plot was all over the place and a lot was happening that it was difficult to follow .The romance also felt rushed and i can't get behind the idea of a reincarnated person dating a child.

why author, if you want to Nerf something, then Nerf things that are not canon. Also rather than changing the jutsu you could have made it so that the mental strain of multiple clones is a lot for the protagonist and only a jinchuriki could use it to train

the story was very interesting in the beginning but it was was ruined for me by character of the mc, if you can get over the initial 30 chapters it is a good novel but sadly its not for me