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Mystrixxa1_Trish

Mystrixxa1_Trish

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Usually solitary, so to escape into my silence I write. I write with a mission, I play with words, I print my imagination to each page as mystery unfolds into words.

2021-05-29 BeigetretenTrinidad & Tobago
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  • Mystrixxa1_Trish
    Mystrixxa1_Trish2yr
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    ok well I guess the transition or maybe the flow is missing something. A reader should be able to tell.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasie · d_nmalory
    detail
  • Mystrixxa1_Trish
    Mystrixxa1_Trish2yr
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    Unusual but interesting I like it

    Ch 1 The Legendary Tale!
    altalt
    Becoming God of a Dystopian World
    Ost · The_Fake_God
    detail
  • Mystrixxa1_Trish
    Mystrixxa1_Trish2yr
    Kommentiert

    somehow chapter 2 seems like another story. maybe it should be introduced in the preceding chapters . Chapter three seemed like the actual continuation of chapter 1. but I am following this story, it's nice.👍

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasie · d_nmalory
    detail
  • Mystrixxa1_Trish
    Mystrixxa1_Trish2yr
    Kommentiert

    needs edit in last line

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasie · d_nmalory
    detail
  • Mystrixxa1_Trish
    Mystrixxa1_Trish2yr
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    some editing will benefit. I think it's good otherwise. I like it.👍

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    altalt
    The Isle of Guardians
    Fantasie · d_nmalory
    detail