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Multi-Shadow clone jutsu is forbidden. Shadow Clone jutsu is not.

This isn’t saying strain your muscles to increase chakra reserves. This is saying drain your chakra like you would strain muscles in excerise to increase the reserves.

What do you mean by the latter half of your sentence?

Might Guy has chakra-there’s no character in the series that has any relevance and doesn’t have chakra.

We don’t know where Elbert is going, so you can’t just say she dumped all the problems onto him. And yeah, with a change in leadership, the shuffle is a possible opportunity people need to take power from the family.

So, Author, (although I doubt you’ll see this) here’s some feedback from me as of chapter 38. Firstly, some positives-I think you’re making pretty likeable an interesting characters. At least, I can see myself being interested. I also like the idea of him needing to clean up the business before they become too problematic. For some areas of improvement-I think you could be slowing down on the characters and the focus. Especially when it comes to Pyris’ relationships with these ladies. We jumped from his sister to the vampire princess to his assistant to now this succubus. It feels that you’re eager to get to the harem and the excitement that not all of your intent is coming through. It’s as if you’re trying to explain why someone should watch a series by jumping into the highlights with minimal context given. Let yourself and the characters linger and build into the world via varying dynamics. I don’t mean to talk shit author. I’m actually enjoying your series so far and I think you can get much better.

I think the staring is where it happened

I think you meant face and not fave author.

I suppose I ought to add it it.

He definitely just popped into my head, even though he’s the grandfather.