Storyline & Plot are to the point. Apprehensive to read. Word choice is really good. Sentence framework is so apt & fluent to read. Great Work ❤️ Keep It Up 😉🌟

Word Choice, Fluency, Content Framework & Overall Imapact is so beautifully depicted Buddy ✨ Such a nice creation at this young age 💡. Proudly Saying to keep it up & continue this awesome rythyme of writing ✨ Well done Dushi 🌅🌻😃