while I find the story interesting, I am always lost in all the constant explanations about the characters' strengths and weaknesses. It's like I'm am studying about the nature of the characters, and the focus for entertainment gained from storytelling is lost. Author, you are not teaching but telling a story, so enjoy it and losen up a little. I want to emphasize that; I love, love your story so far.

I appreciate your support 👌😊

Thank you for your support.😊

loving the story so far😉😉😉👍👍👍

Thank you.

Hi Ada, This is Illumina. I just got your text. Thanks for the review on my book. I will love to join the contest and see how I can promote my book.

Thank you for the review on my book, I am really grateful, but I would like to see how it works out first. As for now I can't say if it will turn out to be a great novel or not. I am just going to keep doing my best and hopes it turns out well.