Roasai_Willow

I had been enjoying this novel. It had a good plot, interesting and full characters, the flow of the plot was goid, it didn’t drag or have any unnecessary fillers or repeative situations. However, translation wise - it steadily went diwn hill. From mixed up genders, inconsistent names both of the characters and drama/tv show names which made reading confusing. But those mistakes while annoying, didn’t distract from enjoying the atory - however then came the repeative paragraphs and missing sections of the novel. I had to go find the raw just too see if I was just imagining it. But unfortunately there are missing parts which is extremely dissapointing. I won’t waste any more money paying to unlock any further chapters as the quality is steadily declining.

Something is obviously missing here

Peach Trees 1 - 0 Shu Su

Ooh foreshadowing?

Overall its a decent novel. A good storyline, good characterisation, its an enjoyable read. However, it does need editing. While in general the translation quaility is good, the constant gender and name mix up are annoying especially as the standard of translation is good. I really wish someone could re-edit it to fix them or allow people to help edit especially as nothing on Webnovel is cheap, to pay so much money for sometimes subpar translation/editing. This is one aspect Webnovel needs to up its game on. You would get more people looking to pay out their ridiculous prices if they gave better quaility translations.

Should it not be 200?

Oh Karma - you beautiful thing

Why am I crying over this? My heart hurts for Siyu.

🤣 this two man play is a masterpiece