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Aaron_Harvey_72757mthVerschicktAn interesting concept, I went into this story thinking it would be poorly done, but I actually see decent grammar, and backstory written inside of it. As I am a fan of Elliot Jackson's other stories, I say give this one a chance. I have a quick question though, Is the ancient one going to be his girl, or is there going to be a breakup or something? The rest of the story is good, it's just the ancient one that I have a slight dislike to the mc's love interest,
- Aaron_Harvey_72757mthVerschickt
Incredibly interesting story, one that is not fueled by the biases of their own opinion, but yet, does what he wants in a way that is explained, and understood, if it is not explained the author acknowledges it and makes way with his promise to explain it soon. This has to be one of the best books on the site and has the potential to be the greatest book of all keep up the good work author.
- Aaron_Harvey_72757mthKommentiertCh 63 The Promised savior
- Aaron_Harvey_72757mthKommentiertCh 62 Asgard
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert
Well...this story was very interesting to read, and I do thank you for posting. I do hope the negative feedback you get from others do not keep you from writing but motivates you to do better... I for one, know how hard it is to write a story, and for you to continue to complete this despite the low in ratings; you earned my respect.
Ch 100 Conclusion - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert
Interesting I guess, Naruto fans made a lot of them over at fanfiction.net which was really amazing, That's not to say I didn't see bad ones, but the good far outway them. You can do a lot of good with it if done right, mostly easy to do if you put forth the effort and know what you're doing.
Ch 70 Quick question( Not a chapter) - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 761 Chapter 767 Yamata no Orochi vs Susanoo
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 2 Shield
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 66 Marvel; I and Gine (Not a chapter)
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 64 Spiderman Debut
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"You managed to get a fan Spiderman." I smirked, "In the form of Felicia Hardy." - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 63 Testing the Spider
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"Just like your father." Hela smiled fondly, - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert
He is Goku after all
Hela smiled, "Your father wouldn't really agree with what your doing, he is already dead." - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert
Lol
"OH COME ON AGAIN!!!! I WAS KAYUGA AND YOU WERE SAKURA!!!!HOW DO I LOOSE TO SAKURA!!!!" - Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert"I am a slut to my beloved." Hela said with a causal shrug of her shoulders, not denying that fact, it's been like this for a while, but recently Blonsky had just laid there defeated and silent, so she was kind of surprised that he spoke.
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertCh 62 Training the Spider
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert'Power Pole Extend.' I thought, the staff glowed before it shot off like lightning towards peter whose spidersense went off, causing him to dodge the attack.
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiertPeter got into a stance, and what made me tilt my head was different, his stance I mean. It was more like a spider than before, Tobey Maguire's stance in the spiderman movies.
- Aaron_Harvey_72751yrKommentiert"Yes you are." I said flatly, "Madam web, what were you thinking!"