Daemon_Sultan

Thanks

I bet my life he is again gonna lose in the future due to underestimating his enemies or due to Selena

What's wrong with this mc?? He acts like a beta, let's himself get slapped by a heroine for no reason and acts like a simp. Highly not recommended

But you are not Brian

What if it was poisonous?

Now I understand why they were hated so much. They are all jerks

Will he kill them for abusing him? I am hoping he will do it

It was a genuine criticism from his part, you are just not able to accept it due to your fragile ego. Every novel has its own bad writings, yours is the same. At the end just accept it and try to see what you can improve overall. Both of us may be wrong but at the end of the day it's just a novel. Anyways have a nice day

Can you make the MC win for once? It was ok at first but it has started getting annoying as hell bruh

there is a reason why the review section exists