The writing quality is great so far, a lot of complex words and great sentence structure. updates come fast and are well done. story development is slow so far but that's because its the beginning of the book, though i really like that. we haven't heard much character design but yet again its the start of the book, world backround theres not mutch of it but from what ive heard its descriptive. well done Skull, great work! keep it up :)

i like this, i can sorta see where this is going but i bet theres gonna be more plot twists to come [img=recommend]