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Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .
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Follow the plotline closely, if you decide to do this then you will start incorporating irregularities in the story which will lead to plot holes ultimately ending the story midway .
There is nothing great about this story. In these types of stories either you have a different concept or get a momentum going. But it's slow all the way till chapter 100.
It's a fresh story focusing on a first cultivator but due to not having anything exciting happening in the story it makes the reading experience very dull.
The story is very erratic. Not at all suitable for a novel narration, the dialogue looks like it's suited for a crack fic or a manga or anime. Not a diss on the story.
The story is good but after some time we are seeing many discrepancies in MC nature and personality which are different from the narrative set by the writer. Because of that the immersion is broken and the story does not remain engaging enough.
The translation and grammar is the biggest thing that is holding this story back. also the pandering of the mc can be lowered to make it more authentic .