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It loses some of its comedic value if you use it too often. Make sure you save it for the occasional dragon, whose too full of itself.

Latia Astaroth Or Seekvaira Agares

I hope he doesn’t join a peerage. He should join the Grigori and form a team like Slash Dog. But….. If you decide to have him join a peerage do something VERY different and have Ajuka notice him and his unique talents and join his peerage!

Luna Lovegood, Tracy Davis and Hanna Abbot.

I’m a 20 year military veteran who worked a lot with special operations and I just wanted you to be aware that the army special forces members would never call themselves a green beret. They never really liked the term but really hate it now as the beret has lost meaning now that every Tom Dick or Harry in the Army and Air Force wears one.

Why hasn’t he even attempted to look at his system shop?

I know the movie only shows Azazel teleporting, but he has so much more to his powers than that. I hope you use all of it.

She is overweight, which is fat. She’s just not obese.

You have it backwards, lightning, defeats, earth, wind, defeats, lightning.

PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS! This is such a good premise for a story and very original too!