FlappyPenguin

This novel is plagued with telling instead of showing. A majority of chapters are just a bombardment of information told to you by the mc or side character. Stop telling me shit and have the mc actually do or figure something out on his own. Stop the pointless back and forth conversations. I've literally skipped entire chapters because the author just doesn't stop. keeps repeating and repeating what's already been said.

Powers and power levels are not well defined. I had to quit after one character randomly used gravity powers and stunned a villain for a while. However, the villain 'got serious', clapped, and freed himself from the gravity force. HOW??????

meh, he has lightning affinity.

heh, only 193. I'm 194 :p

skinny

This novel has really good flow. There is no mindless storytelling. There is always a clear goal and most of the questions you ask as a reader get answered. This web novel definitely deserves a better ranking.

The writing quality and world building is pretty good for this website, yet the character motivation is pretty lacking. This makes it difficult to get into the story.

Make him 6'4" and that's me