The end of a story is only the beginning of the next one. "Book devourer" is the best way to describe me...
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*embarrassed reply* I'm a bit busy with my studies in this period... I have 2 exams within the next few months and the stress generated by them is not small... sorry
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Yes, I took the idea from that novel...
oh, I got it... You're indeed right... it may not make sense to use precise units in descriptions... After all, it's impossible to let the readers visualize what I'm imagining... It's better to let their imagination fill the gaps As for the problems with the cave arcs, I've indeed felt like there is something wrong... Maybe because there isn't any real character? The conversations with the AI were as simple as I could make them and to be honest they make perfect sense to me but it may actually be like this because, after all, I'm the all-mighty and omniscient author... I will need to gather more feedbacks to pinpoint the problems and fix them... Anyway, thanks for the clarification, I think we can agree there is nothing better than understanding how to improve when writing a story
Thanks for your honest opinion, I definitely appreciate it but more importantly I'm curious about the constructive critiques. First, the measurement units, can you please elaborate on it? I'm not sure where is the problem or how to fix it... Same for the feeling of a big dragging (This time I have no idea of that sentence's meaning) Can you elaborate a little so that I can understand how to improve? thanks
...between the chapters so that does not interested can... -->...between the chapters so that those not interested can...
Hm... Tbh, I was a bit perplexed about how to give him more screen time... After all, he is an important character for both the story development of this novel and another novel of mine that I've just started creating... The only problem is how to do so. At first, I thought that giving him a bit of space within a chapter when he met a major plot twist was enough… but doing so doesn't allow the readers to empathise much with him nor does it let the readers discover his background story…. So, I recently came to a possible solution. Maybe I can dedicate a whole chapter to him sometimes… Something like the short story in the auxiliary chapters that I've published 2 days ago… With the only difference being that rather than a short story I can make it a parallel story hidden between the chapters so that does not interested can directly skip it… Maybe I should also keep an auxiliary chapter as an index to let readers who skipped side stories find them easily
He isn't tired of living...
Hehehe, glad you got confused. When a character says or thinks something, doubt should fill the reader's mind as questions like "Is this information true?" or "Is he saying what he/she truly thinks, or is he/she wearing a mask?"