MGSR_Sam

classic webnovel garbage, no need to bother reading it.

sorry, but I gotta be honest with you, or you wouldn't be able to fix your mistakes. don't get me wrong, you are willing to spend time and effort writing stories. it would be such a shame not to improve yourself as a writer. I wish you the best.

story is bland, and there is not much emotion. needlessly buffed overhaul quirk. mc is mary sue every day chinese mc, no thoughts, head empty, strolling around the story. mc creates a chimera and how he did it explained afterward with no details, nothing but a patchwork for plot holes.

more like overpowered done wrong. he succeeded using rtc in his first try. This is absurd. You can't tell a story with a character like this.

ah, another gentleman of fine taste.