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so..so..so cringe 😬
his starting to become arrogant
bad way of thinking
he has a phone for a reason right 😅
there's a difference between control and output of mana
I think it makes sense of what type of mc u trying to create it makes it feel more real instead of just a character that can do anything and not even have the emotion of a human after all he's still just a normal person and "accidentally" killed morte. so it make sense that he won't go around hunting other red players and kill them. So in summary good work author cause this fic feels more real.
man author u are the best and the way u describe the husband slowly going insane due to the game makes perfect sense. All of ur characters feels alive. Not only that u actually make changes in the cannon that not many will do and if they do they mess up badly, u on the other hand created a masterpiece of fanfic.
nice
that is so dumb
not exactly as seen in the book and movie mcgonal transformed an animal into a goblet thought what he is trying to do is the peak of this branch of magic permanent transmutation
doesn't mean he can't use what he knows for his advantage especially of the future
one of them ate a human
Ah he lost it and became a battle maniac