Roonman

Thanks!!!

Lmfoa thank you man

I love how pessimistic the guy is lol, rip his parents though. I think this is an interesting story, especially because it's reincarnation after a tragedy so there's a different kind of incentive for him to change worlds. The grammar and word structures need work because they make the story a little hard to read at times. Good job and keep on writing my dude!

same

Devil is usually on the left shoulder, so it's interesting he says its on his right

Good Job author first of all, writign can be hard to do. I think the story is good, i liked th eexplosiveness fo the begining, you know revealing that she poisioned him and all, I liked that. I think this is a good story, my only problem with it is grammar, I think if you write in google docs it would point out some of your mistakes which could help. Good Luck!

Thank you! I appreciate very much. Im glad my wiriting was immersive enough!!!

Thats what i was goign for thank you! Though i will try to take your advice and try to cater to the webnovel style more!

I think that this is a really good novel, i only read a few chapters but everytume i read one it made me want to read the next and the one after it. The world building and character devlopment are great so far. I think you sometimes use words that are unnecessarily advanced, it makes the text feel unnatural. And ofc stability of updates but authors have their own lives to tend, so good luck managing time going further!

or it is '46, im not sure now