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if THIS is better grammer the Grammer from the old one must have been fatal, because this is barely acceptable
conceded not conceited
what?
this is very poorly worded. would be perfect if the second and third sentences happy said were gome
so much for Bekka being super afraid of others blood
hemeans like farmer 5 vs farmer10
honestly it doesn't seem like that big of a problem, only you are noticing it and other people only notice it once u point it out
??? If you made a mistake, just fix it!
I laughed loud in a crowded breakroom
lit
build in the paradise
britian?
I just read back and this literally didn't happen?
inhabitants
prob above the head like the Sims green thing
a character can only be as smart as the author. I don't have much hope