Crank_Ponies

I’d like to see a good blue lock fic without and cheats

Does he have a system or does his magic just take the form of a system?

The general plot is good and the soul fragments are interesting but my biggest issue is that he lets himself be used by others and lets things happen to him rather than making things happen himself. Raiko even used him for a war game that he didn't even agree too. He could have just dismantled the appolo familia himself. She never even warned him about it and then he has to suffer the consequences of that war game and her killing Appolo while hardly getting any benefits for him or his familia because the prize was spilt between different familia. If you want to know what I mean then read "Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers". This is a protagonist who takes control of his fate rather than letting things happen to him and just reacting to the world.

it seem like this war game was more trouble that its worth

you should use the "standing here I realize"

just tell her already

you should have had your mom look into kaori

I'd also like to see ojiros quirk awaken and for him to gain all the abilities of a ghoul from Tokyo Ghoul

1. Are his eyes the six eyes, because it seems he can not see whos coming around him sometimes.. 2. Will he learn to heal himself like with reversed cursed energy? 3. Some characters seem to have much stronger and more durable bodies than others even though their quirk doesn't help them in that way like Mina with her acid that provides minor increased durability to not be melted and slightly increased strength because her whole body is mutated, so does the MC's quirk provide him with increase durability and strength or intelligence like bakugous would need to handle the recoil and accidental explosive damage if he were to trigger it while sleeping or something. 4. Will the MC gain all of Gojo Satoru's abilities and will there be new ones? 5. Will you make Geto Sugaru into a villain and will he be an extremist like overhaul that hates quirks, or make him into someone that hates mutant quirks and the quirkless. 6. Will you make quirk awakenings a thing so we can see quirks evolve like devil fruit awakenings? There can be multiple types, with emitters losing a limitation after awakening like Mandalay being able to hear thoughts, mutants can awaken like Zoans types in One Piece, and transformation types can gain a minor ability corresponding to their transformation like Tetsu Tetsu being able to manipulate his steel body.

Dogshit!!!