I'm currently pretty busy with some important exams that are coming up, but I will try to update soon.

I don't know if I should take this as a compliment or not, but I actually didn't use AI to write my story. I also know that the conversations between the characters are not that good, but that is also the point where I struggle the most. I often change them or write them anew, so there might seem to be some problems. I will work on it and try to make them more natural.

He will use it in the next chapter for both rewards.

Sorry, I changed it

Is the length of chapter 17 appropriate, or should I consider making the descriptions even shorter?

Dear Readers, I'd like to begin by expressing my heartfelt gratitude to all of you for taking the time to read my first novel. This journey so far, has been a significant learning experience for me, and every support that I can get is appreciated. As I reflect on the chapters I've written so far, I acknowledge that there are still many areas where I've room for improvement. One of my key takeaways is that I often tend to delve into unneeded thought processes and provide info dumps that, upon reflection, are more extensive than necessary. I'm committed to addressing this and ensuring a more streamlined and engaging reading experience moving forward. Starting with the 17th chapter, my focus will shift towards a deeper exploration of the storyline. I've recognized that some readers may find the initial part of the novel too immersed in descriptions, and I appreciate your patience. The upcoming chapters will prioritize storytelling. I've still got many ideas for the rest of the novel, and I sincerely hope that you'll continue this journey with me. My aim is to ensure that these ideas don't get overshadowed by lengthy descriptions, and I'm determined to make the narrative more captivating and exciting. Once again, I want to say that your feedback and criticism are invaluable to me as I strive to make this novel the best it can be. I'm committed to learning and growing with every chapter, and your insights will play a significant role in this process. Thank you for joining me on this adventure, and I look forward to hearing your thoughts and making this novel better with each new chapter. With sincere appreciation, Easy, Your Author

I appreciate your review and will make an effort to enhance my focus on the story.

I intend to share chapters daily for the remainder of this week and the following week. In the subsequent week, I will transition to uploading new chapters primarily on the weekends.

I've created a Discord channel and put it in the synopsis of the novel. You can join if u want. :)

I have changed some stuff in chapter one and two. I hope this version is better, and thank you for the review.

Discord: https://discord.gg/VfC8Qqzdmf

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon