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Dauk_Sama_0066

Dauk_Sama_0066

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2021-03-26 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00663mth
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    Yupp if it more higher then there will be no fun adventures. Bet this will increase by time n become more OP

    [Talent: 7 Stars.]
    Protective Leader, disciples under the sect are all emperors
    Ost · le_yu
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00663mth
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    'What am I even thinking? It's not like that is some kind of treasured sword and the boy is the main character of some XianXia novel of a struggling writer…'
    Getting a Sugar Mommy in Cultivation World!!
    Ost · Odayaka
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00666mth
    Antwortet auf thefirespeaks

    when will you come backk ?? 🥲

    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasie · thefirespeaks
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00661yr
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    what is the meaning of this ? 😂😂 is it like "are you serious ?"

    True?
    In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park
    Ost · Lumydee
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00661yr
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    yupp cautions is good but dont let people step on you and do nothing. KILL HERRR !!!!!! HAHAHAHA

    'You also wait. You won't get away with me.' Yang Lujia simply grinned at her warning and allowed a trace of his energy to dwell on her body. He was really pissed off. 'After I'm done here, I'm going to ruthlessly kill you.'
    Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System
    Fantasie · thefirespeaks
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  • Dauk_Sama_0066
    Dauk_Sama_00661yr
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    haaa ~ seriously... i hate to admit it but this is to sad. ive read all your book with system and all of em' look promising and have a big potential with the concept and everything. apart from the grammars for me all is good. But as the stories progress you seems to miss certain parts of the details. I really love the concept of your book with op MC and the systems. I hope you can focus on 1 book cause you hv 3 book with the same concept right but different plots. But i hope you can focus on one book after another. Cause most the reader will prefer the quality over quantity. Overall i love your idea, concept, ranking system and everything but the story development still need improvement. Aside from grammars that i think will improve over time. keep up a god work author

    THE WORLD EMPEROR SYSTEM
    Fantasie · BabyF_05062016
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