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I love the concept, the world building, and the power structure, but this feels like slice of life genere compared to action. The 'System' growth structure doesn't match 'slice of life' story development going on in this story, it feels unbalanced and weird. Sadly, the urban style with childhood sweethearts is what author wanted, even the world could be matched somehow, but power and story development along with System type doesn't seem to match the style at all.

The MC is a pathetic SIMP

People trying to find every logic in a fantasy world is what is absurd. How about the guy is special because the story is about him. I understand trying to find 'fantasy logic' in world creation, character building, and other things but who complains about why the guy is the MC, that's not a review that's just pointless roasting (for the lack of better word)

Even though the concept is nothing new stil love the story, love the world design, the power progression of MC feels a bit too much like a plot armor, a little bit, but still ok. The most disappointing is MC's characterisation itself, it's too confusing, but giving MC the benefit of the doubt that he is still not and too many things going on, it is acceptable. Also, I love that unlike most of this genere where all the girls MC comes across throws themselves at him, this story is different and doesn't paint all girls like airhead bimbos. But the dissapointing this is MC's unhealthy obsession with Bran and his not so ex-girlfriend Sierra(from pre time travel) is pure pathetic, this just destroys a good story. I mean I understand that as per MC's vengeful character to dislike Bran for defeating him but his obsession with Sierra doesn't make any sense

Nice story, amazing characterization with the unique blind MC and the connection to the Blind God of Darkness, Hodr. The world creation and the power structure with each their own skills is also great. The biggest disappointment though is the heavy armor plot with everyone liking MC and him being able to fight across multiple tiers, also the character development is confusing as it is hard to understand if the direction is strong, mature and smart or brave, unyielding and naive ( neither really goes with the element darkness). The foundation concepts for the story are great but so far with how the story is progressing, it feels like a children's story book.

Amazing storyline, simple power pyramid but in depth world structure and political dynamics, no OP golden finger, best MC setup, cold and calculating (as an antihero suppose to be which most authors don't understand), completely focused on goals: army building, finance generating, political connection, no unnecessary sideline story of emotion or romance. Completely different from most story out there which follows same tamplate and either has harem or romance to increase readers. Read till 509 ep and love every bit of it

Thank you for this info, I really hate it when romance is forcefully introduced a wonderful story where it is not required just to increase readers

Tbh everything is great, the concept, the MC psychology based on his powers and circumstances, the power system, other characters are interesting as well. The only disappointment is why does romance have to be forcefully fed into an interesting storyline. I mean how does a mad, greedy, distrustful, genius Eldritch Necromancer has anything to do with Romance is beyond my understanding. I'm not against romance but don't change the character so drastically that suddenly after few chapters MC is behaving romantically and sharing all the info with the other person. This just messed up the original Character and the story as whole and it definitely doesn't feel like character development 😕

The story elements are very good, the story itself could have been far better. The biggest disappointment is the MC. The character of MC doesn't make sense. It feels like there is a misunderstanding of how psychology of a mage works, especially an old one with supreme powers, yet the character of the MC is made to behave like a reckless teenager instead of one that has already live a life of a Supreme magician. I initially expected it to be a momentary decision to make MC behae like this, but when you pass 100 chapters and MC is still behaving that doesn't make any sense, then there is something wrong with the story and character setting itself. Maybe take reference from 'Warlock of the Magus World' on the psychology of an antihero magician.

Not sure why this is in anti-hero genre, even without the mismatch genre the MC is a disappointment and the story has way too much plot armor.