Fall3n_

Review from the author. Hello I'm writing this review and will try to be honest with my thoughts on the story and its later chapters. (Disclaimer: This will be a long review) Writing Quality So far, from what I have found, there have been no terrible grammatical errors, and the spelling should be on par. However, I have had a couple of friends read the story and say that in some parts, they had to double take on what happened, so that's something I want to acknowledge. Also, sometimes I write texts that take time to understand or don't make much sense. So I apologize if that happens to you often. Stability of Updates I can't promise things, but I can say that I will try my best to release them as often as possible. However, I will acknowledge that I have school to juggle simultaneously, so there aren't any promises. Story Development Before getting into the story, I suggest "The Beginning" chapter as it might cover the history of this world and/or later events in future chapters. Otherwise, I plan on making the story move slower than maybe some other novels you've read. From my plan, I can promise action, academy/school life, exploration, and some other things that aren't important... Yet(at the time of writing this). There will be many shifts in the genres as the story continues, and there will be much content. Character Design I enjoy creating relatable characters and like to base the story on real things. There aren't many characters I have listed currently, but there will be a lot more in the future as the story continues. World Background I like the visuals I try to describe when I'm writing and have a habit of telling little details that have no relevance to the story. I enjoy world-building and plan on making that one of the main things to focus on while writing. Thank you if you read all that, and I hope you take some time out of your day to read what I've made. Cheers

Review from the author. Hello I'm writing this review and will try to be honest with my thoughts on the story and its later chapters. (Disclaimer: This will be a long review) Writing Quality So far from what I have found, there have been no horrible grammatical errors and the spelling should be on par. I have had a couple of friends read the story and said that on some parts they had to double take on what happened so that's something I want to acknowledge. Sometimes I write texts that take time to understand or just doesn't make a lot of sense. So I apologize if that happens to you often. Stability of Updates I can't promise things but I can say that I will try my best to release as often as possible. I will acknowledge that I do procrastinate at times and that I have school to juggle at the same time, so the stability of updating might vary. Story Development Before getting into the story I suggest "The Beginning" chapter as it might make solve later things in future chapters. Otherwise, I plan on making the story move slower than some other novels. From my plan, I can promise action, academy/school life, and some other things that aren't important... Yet. There will be a lot of shifts in the genres as the story goes on as there will be a lot of content. Character Design I enjoy creating characters that are relatable and like to base the story on realistic things. There aren't a lot of characters that I have listed currently but there will be a lot more in the future as the story goes on. I have to mention though that I do kill some characters. World Background I like the visuals that I try to describe when I'm writing and have a habit of describing little details that have no relevance to the story. I enjoy world building and plan on making that one of the main things to focus on while writing. Thank you if you read all of that and I hope you take some time out of your day to read what I've made. Cheers.[img=recommend]

The story is solid and the MC is OP but doesn't feel forced. The world building is interesting and well thought out. Do suggest still releasing chapters Retro

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