Maybe 'lost' wasn't the right word. We are seeing less and less of those traits because she is constantly having to hide her behavior or not do it at all because of other people.

Eh, she's becoming too easy to bend to the whims of others. I'm not really opposed to her forming intimate connection with others, but constantly capitualting to people is no good. Part of what makes this story is good is cherry's unpredictable and wild nature, but if that's constantly being 'reigned in' by others, we are losing a huge part of the draw of the story. Nami shouldn't be making decisions for someone who is a nominal part of the crew, nor should tatting to Robin about cherry wearing armor to meet a gangster pirate matter at all. Robin fell in love with wild cherry, she didn't fall in love with 'tamed' cherry. I appreciate your efforts and that you haven't dropped this novel it's very enjoyable. However this is my one complaint, Cherry is being far to retrained from bering herself by those who are supposed to be her friend. It's giving the same feeling as a spouse and her friends gaining up on the other spouse to peer pressure them into becoming boring and giving up what they love. Cherry has lost her ruthlessness, her wild and unrestrained behavior, she's lost her freedom and all at the hands of 'the freest crew in the world' and her lover. It's a little disspointing tbh.

Idk man. Akainu and aokiji fought for seven days and nights. This resulted in the complete devastation of a huge island and ended with one half of the island freezing into ice and the other half turning into a burning hell. So obviously they werent casually fighting, it was battle for supremacy. They were so close to being equals that it took 7 days to determine a winner. So for Damien to be completely spent in a couple hours is trash. It's even more trash when you consider he has a godlike physique that only true born monsters have. For him to have low stamina is so ridiculous. For example, what you think if you heard that a god like heracles or ares got tired after fighting hard for a couple hours, meanwhile a goddess like aphrodite or hestia could fight for weeks on end at full strength. So I can only think this is some negative plot armor weakness that author came up with to try and not make Damien too strong. Moreover going by this 'losing lifespan' thing, akainu and aokiji should be withered old men after that fight.

It's funny cause that never happened.

The whole Japanese thing is completely screwing with your story's immersion. I know it doesn't make logical sense but you should have just made him speak English. I can't understand a word Naruto is saying so how can I enjoy the story?

Yeah this kind of breaking of the fourth wall doesn't really work. Even in films where it kind of works, it disrupts the flow of the story. I would not recommend doing this kind of thing in the future. It gives me the same disruptive feeling as reading a novel and there's a (TN or AN or EN) every other paragraph. Extremely disruptive to the continuity of your novel and makes your character seem weird.

This sentence doesn't make any sense.

Yeah that's true, but he's not even safe from regular human guns yet. A single good sniper shot would end him if he didn't have danger sense. It's possible, and not even a small possibility, for someone to know of his capabilities and checkmate him into biting a sniper bullet. If you live in marvel and can still be capped by some regular bloke who's good with a gun then you have no capital for arrogance.

Agreed .if he completely lost kyoka suigetsu he wouldn't be an aizen template anymore. It'd just be a blank shinigami template. Aizen zanpakuto is a cheat and for him to lose and would be a huge waste

If Naruto and Sasuke w Kept training and learning and kept their inherited power, they would be so strong that no otsutsuki so far except maybe is shiki would stand a chance. This would leave no room for boruto to be the protagonist so kishimoto got out his nerf gun and started blasting Sasuke and Naruto until they were weaker than when pain attacked konoha.

Lol everyone is being given huge powerups to be able to give the Mc trouble. Annoying. If you want the Mc to struggle don't make him op.

I don't think threatening to use an ability that would kill him after like a minute is any kind of power play. When he can reach that level without dying then he can talk big.

Totally missed it. Had to go back and re read the whole chapter.

Where is this delusion coming from? He said he struggled against Enel. Enel is like new world ship commander level. Barely.

A bishop? That's really it? Takumi is way stronger than issei was and although rias was just a regular high class and grayfia is ultimate class, a bishop is a little low. I'd expect someone with a high tier longinus and some strength to require more than a bishop. If you're gonna make him a devil at least use the queen piece bru

Yes he did.

Went right over my head.

Sorry man I can't read Spanish. I also can copy your comment.

So like 90% are sea bandits, 5% are adventurers and 5% are ugly, evil b*stards who want to rule the world with an iron fist? This is probably about right .

I felt that if I made too many comments about this situation, I'd start losing brain cells with every letter I typed.