I honestly didn't consider that part since I wanted to just jump into the first scene and portray the slice-of-life part of the story first before everything else.

I mean he kind of train them, but only after the powers manifested. Not a clue in or a reference to any combat training suggested or asked in the show or comics at all. As far as I can remember

Fine. Youve broken me. I don't tend to go with harem stories, but I am exploring some story avenues where my MC is with many women that actually make sense for the story I'm going

My reason for this was that if Omni-Man hadn't even trained Debbie, his wife who could easily be taken hostage if his enemies knew of her, even a little bit in their almost 2 decades of marriage then I highly doubt he would offer to train his young sons who haven't even shown a bit of power

It's a sneak peek of what his story is. A clue in

All true, haha. But you have to agree on one thing, he enjoyed the fun times while they were fun

Which part?

My apologies, my anger got the best of me and I have no other excuse than that. I appreciate the support so far and thank you for reading.

Damn, this was harsh. But I get it. Thank you for the review anyway and I hope you do find something you'll like here.

Hey, author dono! Nice to see another Invincible fanfic on this site and your idea for it is quite a unique and refreshing take that I'll be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation! Keep up the good work!

Honestly haven't decided yet. I'm planning on adding one more girl on my main OC cast to really flesh out the choices

Okay. Here's where my head was at during the writing. Madison and Clarissa are obviously hooking up. Madison kisses Matthew's cheek, leaves a piece of hair stuck there, and immediately thinks that the hair could only come from...well...

I appreciate the enthusiasm as ever, friend.But believe me when I say that the drama will stem from something else rather than a love triangle situation or anything romantic. In my interpretation of the show, Eve is in a weird place in her life where she's still figuring things out. Her family life, college, her superheroing, and a whole lot more. Hence why I think the night with Matt was somewhat possible given her confusion and need for validation after the breakup. And while I would very much enjoy entangling my MC/SI with her for obvious reason, I couldn't really see a situation where I could somehow faithfully have her stay in character. It's why I set up Alicia, Throwbolt, as the current main beau. For now. In the future volume/season ill be writing, who knows? I do hope that answers some of your concerns

I can't say that he won't. But currently I'm not planning on it.

It's gonna be subtle and not exactly explicit. I apologise

I feel I'm being cruel but...That's certainly a good idea

That's a good question. 😉

Okay then. 1st - As I understand the euphemisms involved, Madison is an Omnivore for all intents and purposes. So no need to convert 2nd - It,the cheating, might have started there but Eve hadn't really seen them in the act up until after the Guardians funeral.3rd - It's certainly a good plot point and I wouldn't necessarily say I didn't consider it, but I'm still deciding on which is the proper waifu for my SI. Eve is definitely one of those, for sure

Jesus, reading these comments of yours is giving me whiplash 🤣😅But I do see your point and it's an issue I am going to address once in Season 2

This was unusually harsh, but okay. It's a valid comment that I certainly won't deny. I have my reasons for following the show closely and not letting Matt do certain things.