Mangaholic24_7

Honestly, your descriptions are excellent. I feel like you are doing really well by describing to the readers. The way your writing keeps improving and the way the story unfolds is genuinely superb. A little feedback is that maybe if you would like, instead of saying what the person feels, try to describe the feeling that way it can draw the readers in. Otherwise, I believe you have don grade with characters and everything.

The way you wrote is sooo good; I really do like your style of writing.

Wow, great writing. Also, 3-5 days that's amazing considering most can't even pull 1 a week.

Your book is excellent. People should really take a look at it. I would advise you always to have someone review your drafts before releasing them. Also, try to put who is speaking before what they say to give it better and clearer context.

Maybe you would make ‘doeS not trample on the weak nor fear the strong’

Thank you for this wonderful comment!

Wow this is really a slice of life. Relatable wow.

Great use of descriptive words. Making use of better and not so common words!

Please do read and check for updates. Add it to your library and you can get updates!

Thanks for recommanding it to others!