You my friend have always made engaging works and honestly I expect the trend to continue. I’ve loved your two previous story’s, sorry fanfics, and are excited to see what you’ll do with an original.
Raiting 5 stars ❤️
To be honest I don’t understand how this has such a good raiting, I mean it’s ok but not great. Additionally I find the grammar and or choice of words lacking
Being a sucker for romance and vr novels I decided to give white online a try. The story itself is well done and the world building is fine. Personally I’m not a fan of the choice of words and the character dialog can be slightly off putting. Otherwise good job 👍