TDwk

Hi everyone, it's a shameless author. :) Though it's my first work, in my opinion, this story isn't bad. But I might be mistaken, so I would be really thankful if you left a review and comments with your opinion, which might be really helpful for me to improve my story. After all, I want to see this story to its very end.

Thanks

Funny story. When reading, I don't know what will happen in the next scene. But the writing style might be a difficult adversary for readers. I'll wait for the author's improvement in writing.

The world and character designs are good. This story has good potential for development. I think it would be interesting reading. The only thing that prevents me from fully enjoying the story is the poor writing quality and the few chapters. I hope that the author can improve these with time.

Thanks for your honest opinion, I appreciate it.

If you love fast-paced stories, this one can be interesting to read. And the concept of transporting into another world, when you think it's just a game, is very intriguing.

As a teenager, I was much the same. Wanted to be a pro gamer

Yes, I know it's shameless to vote for your own novel, and even more shameless to vote for all 5 stars, but I need it to get some attention from you. I am a beginner at writing, and I really want to finish this story, but I am not sure about my writing capabilities. So, if you, reader, can give me some feedback through comments and review about my story, I would be really thankful.