Xtrafunguy_86
Fun guy that loves fantasy, OP characters, systems, Comedy, Sci-fi, and Action. I sometimes read random ones that catch my fancy😂
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Xtrafunguy_8612hKommentiertChapter 12 What Does the Fox Say?- Xtrafunguy_863dAntwortet auf Poisonsectelder04_
I mean I can too, but that's not the point... It is still wrong, and it helps the author grow as a writer when you point out the mistakes. You can be a happy fool in your own world, but I decided to apply what I learned in school over the years. If everyone just passed along the mistakes(like you) then the author/translator might not know there is a problem. Hell, they even have a correction option now for the newer novels. You literally report mistakes automatically. If they didn't want people's feedback about mistakes, then why does that function exist 🤔hmmm? Guess what it is called?.... "Correction" ... So the more you reply with your "who cares about grammar and spelling" nonsense, the dumber you sound. Your being borderline stupid now.
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_864dAntwortet auf Poisonsectelder04_
well duh, I was mocking you.. That is exactly what you are saying, it makes you sound dumb and quite ignorant.
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_864dKommentiert
his* male need male pronouns
Aakesh extended her right hand and touched right above her private parts. Maria's face got red, not due to embarrassment as she knew he did this to check up on her dantian. Her face became red due to him finding the repulsive scar on her body through his touch. - Xtrafunguy_864dKommentiert
went up to him*
Maria nervously went up to her. She had no idea what Aakesh wanted to do, but somehow she never doubted any bad intention. - Xtrafunguy_864dAntwortet auf Anthony_Huffman_1174
he has blue skin, so did you forget about that
This store is known as 'The First Store'. Aakesh was more than six feet tall, had dark blue skin even bluer than poison; wavy black hairs coming down to his waist; black eyes that could suck light like the abyss. He had the perfect looks any being could have. After cleaning the mess, he sat on a chair waiting for the customer, with Lily lazing on his shoulder. - Xtrafunguy_865dAntwortet auf Poisonsectelder04_
BTW your critique of my comment, makes you sound ignorant.. "Nobody should care about grammar and mistakes in a book as long as it kinda makes sense"... that's what what you sound like
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_865dAntwortet auf
well you jumped to conclusions. I don't read to look for mistakes, I noticed mistakes and decided to alert the author or translator there is a mistake(usually in a fun way). It does take away from the story if there are multiple mistakes. Just because I understand what the author/translator meant, doesn't mean that the average reader will. So yeah, If you think I purposely read to correct people, you are dead wrong
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_866dAntwortet auf Poisonsectelder04_
well he forgot to put a vowel in a name this time, and he has a problem with Hael's name... he keeps calling hale as well as Hael.. and there are other instances where the vowels are missing or misplaced. so how was it odd?
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_866dKommentiertBy count, this was his third sister-in-law. His eldest and second brothers had both died on their Awakening Day, his fourth sister was married off, his fifth brother died on a cannon fodder mission, and his sixth sister went mad and was killed by the security force. Besides himself, only his parents, his third brother, third sister-in-law, and his sixteen-year-old younger brother were left in the family.
- Xtrafunguy_866dKommentiert
shouldn't it be.. I'm hungry, go make me some food
Then, he looked around the hall and said to Liu Yuan, "I'm hungry. I'm going to make some food." - Xtrafunguy_866dKommentiert
wrong man, you mean the Du guy. Lu Chen has no superiors
Thus, Lu Chen and Liu Yuan's superiors came to an agreement. - Xtrafunguy_867dKommentiert
no wider than ever??? what's that supposed to mean? what is an ever, and how do we measure it?
Immediately, the signal to keep moving forward was sent as the group began moving forward in a strange zig-zag manner, even though the narrow path was no wider than ever. - Xtrafunguy_867dKommentiert
your vowel use sucks
"Yes, Captain Aelia..." "Come and stand behind me, and replicate every of my steps. I don't trust you enough to think you wouldn't activate the traps due to some stupid sorry mistake that could potentially ruin the mission..." Captain Aelia said as Hael's eyebrow furrowed, but he got tapped on the shoulder by Zhng, who gave him a look that said, 'You can trust her.' - Xtrafunguy_869dKommentiert
laughable, if they only knew the amount of power and skills he has... goose eggs everywhere
"You don't know how powerful these people could be." - Xtrafunguy_869dKommentiert[Special Effect: You can now transform into an Ancient Ash Wolf. You can also use the Ash Wolf's howl towards the moon to summon a full moon regardless of the terrain and climate. It will also deal 500 light attribute magic damage per second to enemies under the moonlight. It will cost 50 MP per second to use.]
- Xtrafunguy_869dKommentiert[Sword Intent: When you use a sword-type weapon, it will burst forth with sword intent. Your attack power will increase to 700%!]
- Xtrafunguy_8611dKommentiert
now he's got a rock hard penis. I mean a penis shaped rock.😂😂😂
Mike's been busy for a while, and casually stuffs the stone into his backpack.