Keith_Potato

I'd rate my work 5 star so bleh. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

the life a protagonist

Quick review . Another book from the author of DXD: Shadow Monarch and Danmachi: The Blind swordman. All of his books are good and I'm expecting this too to be good. So far the story setting is good, which is the one piece world. But not any just main character from one piece , the mc here is the father of demon slayers which is Yoriichi. now this is where it gets exiting because I'm curious how Yoriichi will live here because he is a child here and we're at one piece world . will he still learn breathing techniques ? or will he have a devil fruit ? or just haki ? If you're interested in finding out, you should definitely read the book! (potato out, rate it also if you found it good)

interesting so far, need more chapters

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nxt please🥺

Danmachi but with mc with haki!!?? blind mc but kinda strong like fujitora from one piece!? Female Bell!? no wayyy! This one is good is a good danmachi fanfic, i read some other danmachi fanfic here in webnovel and this one have the most potential to become the best danmachi fanfic here in webnovel , the pace is kinda good maybe the characters lacks some communication but hey the author is a new writer and it seems he's improving in his past chapter in patreon, i suggest your read this there's nothing going to lost to you, it's worth it. that's it potato out :>

it's great, the writer is new and English is his not first language so the grammar is understandable, the grammar might be bad bit it's still understandable, the story is good it might seems confusing at first but i suggest you not to judge it, you should try it first then give your opinions. that's it potato out :>