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Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf daniel_rahnThank you for the feedback; honestly, I didn't notice it at first, but after re-reading the chapter, I also think that the way I portrayed Dawn is a bit lacking. So, I was thinking of doing a revision later (like always). See, as I was writing the chapter earlier, I wanted to make their interaction sweet and lovely, like how Blue Dragon did. However, I can't copy-paste the canon considering the difference in the timeline. Second, my writing style is just different. Anyway, as I was saying, I wanted to make their interaction sweet, pure, yada-yada, but at the same time, I wanted to keep it as natural as possible.
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- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf Daoist007536
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf wormmusimsenjaDieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf daniel_rahn
He would later, but I'm going to make it more complicated.
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf daniel_rahn
No NTR!
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf gaurav_Kumar_1424
ah that's right. ty for reminders.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf gaurav_Kumar_1424
Harem is unrealistic... but dating two like the OG at the same time should be fine.
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf gaurav_Kumar_1424
MC was much more mature than OG Ben, he knew that he couldn't change some characters, so he decided to move on and stop wasting time on them
- Classics21a year agoAntwortet auf Quake_Midaro
No spoiler, but yep, no NTR.
